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The Poetry We Make review at Vaults, London – ‘intriguing, but underdeveloped’

Mia Hall in The Poetry We Make at Vault Festival, London

Elliott and Robin were in a relationship for four years. It didn’t last but they had some good times. Now Robin is exploring his gender identity – and might well be a she – and Elliott finds herself struggling with the idea that the person she loved is transitioning – does that invalidate their entire relationship? Does that cancel out years of intimacy, sexual pleasure and companionship?

This is the complicated emotional terrain that Jaswinder Blackwell-Pal’s play, The Poetry We Make, explores, but it does it predominately through Elliott’s eyes. Though Elijah W Harris gives a sensitive and nuanced performance as Robin, it’s very much a secondary role – Elena Voce’s Elliott sits at the centre of the play.

Though the production acknowledges the fact that this is a story about the trans experience told from its periphery, this doesn’t stop it from feeling awkward at times – Jon Brittain’s Rotterdam [1] dealt with similar subject matter in a more dramatically satisfying way.

But Edwina Strobl’s production has real warmth and there’s an endearing performance from Mia Hall as Dolly Parton (Elliott feels an affinity with the mighty Dolly).

Blackwell-Pal’s play touches on ideas of image and the costumes we all wear, as well as the complexities of dating in a time when people are more open to the concept of gender fluidity, but it feels in need of development. It does, however, include one of the better cunnilingus scenes – hell, probably the only cunnilingus scene – you’re likely to see in the Vaults this year.

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Production Information

The Poetry We Make
The Vaults
February 7, 2018
February 11, 2018
Jaswinder Blackwell-Pal
Edwina Strobl
Alexandra Kapsala
Jess Bernberg
Davide Vox
Stage manager
Hayley Ricketson
Cast includes
Elena Voce, Elijah W Harris, Sam Thorpe Spinks, Mia Hall
Running time